In just a half way..
They show you so much.
They make you feel out of the world.
They gives you a bunch of happiness.
They create a dreamland for you.
They try to steal your heart.
They want to be all yours.
They make your life vibrant and worth living.
They make you feel alive and loved.
They just gift you a terrific time and treasured memories.
But who knows…Everything was short-lived!!
The feelings generated had the shortest life span!
So, an uncalled for, a low down game won it and a muzzled heart stays offbeatedly still waiting for more incursions and assaults!!
A hammered hooked heart got over croocked and cracked under the influence of faithful Adulterer..-“A LADYKILLER”.
Sinfully intriguing.
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Thankyouu.. π
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Very beautiful!
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Tnku.. π
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Both playful and profound
Brilliant and sharp as flint
I β€οΈ
Thanks for visiting my blogπ
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Thank you..!βΊ
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stunning…
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Thankuuπ
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“A hammered hooked heart” – that is an excellent line. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my place… it lead me here π
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Tnku so much..!π¬ much appreciated!! Stay connected..
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it will be my pleasure π
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Same here..! π
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Lovely.
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Thankuu.. π
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Welcome.
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The poem tells an intriguing story with a punch at the end. Will follow. Thanks for following mine.
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Ya..true that.!
Thnku so much..π
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This is life I guess….
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Yes.. true that..! A bitter truth wd fake feelings! π
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Fake feelings you say is it…
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Yess.. sumtymz!! It do happen..
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It happens….. And I am living with that hard feelings
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Ooh..:/
But v can really learn from it to grow..n not b a sufferer..
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Yes for once I was the sufferer and will be the one who suffered but yes moving on growing on so that I don’t remain suffering…. I am on verge and almost over it but those words you wrote as fake feelings do happen and it hurts…. Each day or once a while the past ruins the present ..
The post was so truly felt…..
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Thank you so much..
n yes it do affect us.. I cn understand but itz gud to move on for your well being.. evryone has a bad one dats y itz called a past.. so juz chuck it.. and move on lyf z really beautiful n once u live it u vil find mny gud ppl around you..ππβΊοΈ
god bless youu!
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Namaste π
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This was great and true ππ
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Thankuuπ
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Yes the most amazing people, whom we start loving so much.. who cares and does everything just like what we always wanted in our imagination… Unfortunately they are so short lived !
You’ve expressed an hidden feeling in me .
Lovely and so beautifully true ππ
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such appreciations really counts..Glad u loved it..βΊοΈ thnkuu
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Very very well penned!
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Thnkyouu π
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This explained a part of my life!β€
Beautifully written!!
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Tnkuu so much for appreciating..!π
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It was worth it!β€β€
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Really a nice piece of art. I liked the punch at the end.
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Thnx alot..!βΊοΈ
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